Globalization has been largely
blamed for causing many environmental problems, which is mainly the result of expanding trade between countries. This has led to massive deforestation, overfishing as well as the increase of pollutants which overall economic and social disruptions may rival those of major global events. On the other hand, globalization allows the world to become increasingly interconnected thus people around the world
can easily gain knowledge of the effects of globalization and as a result increasing awareness of the global situation. Despite that, countries are unwilling
to work together to solve global issues and that will curb the United Nations' ability to act upon them.
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Globalization has been largely blamed to(wrong word) cause(word form) many environmental problems, which is mainly the result to(wrong word) expanding trade between countries. The need for economic growth calls for an increased burning of coal and the excessive use of chemicals. This will not only affect the environment of the perpetrator but also the world’s environment and such environment(word form) problems are seen as pressing issues as they have the potential to cause large scale economic and social disruption. On the other hand, globalization allows the world (^) becomes(Verb form) increasingly interconnected,(Punctuation) thus people around the world can easily gain knowledge of the effects of globalization and as a result it aids in the promotion of higher awareness about the global situation. Despite that, countries are unwilling to work together to solve global issues and that will curb the ability of the United Nations to act upon it(Wrong word??).
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